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"In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters, and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?"

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In our modern world today, scientific and technological advances are popular,
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 working in the fields of
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 as artists, musicians, painters and writers still have their own value.
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 is because
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 can teach us
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various things about life that
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 and
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 do not have
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 ability.
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,
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 make people
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see everything from different perspectives. In the area of
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 and
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, we see things exactly
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the way they are but in
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an artist’s
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artist’s
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 eyes, we can see everything as we want and we feel about it.
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, in the approach of a researcher, a dog is just an animal with soft fur,
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and four
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 legs and has the function to look after the house;
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, a dog, to a writer,
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can be a faithful friend, a brave hero.
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 thought helps us gain deeper and more thorough insights and it enables us to solve
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problems more wisely.
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, while
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 and
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 may help us to develop physically,
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 bring peace to our souls.
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, whenever someone is depressed and hopeless, they often find music, which heals their souls and makes them feel more motivated. I think we hardly ever find
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 feeling when we carry out a scientific experiment or a technological survey. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that the world of
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 can bring us a wide range of benefits that
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 and
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 cannot.
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