Usually students have to study a range of different subjects. Some people believe that learning subjects without being interested in them won’t be beneficial. Do you agree or disagree with disagreement?

Although
the students would usually behave better in those
subjects
in which they are interested , I believe it is important to let the youth study a variety of courses for their long-term benefits. I will
further
demonstrate my opinions with examples in
this
essay. In my view, learning a lot of different
subjects
lays a concrete foundation for our future.
For example
, if we haven’t studied Mathematics when we were young, there are a lot of courses we cannot choose when we enter university.
Besides
, some of the
subjects
such
as History and Politics teach us the essential knowledge we have to learn as human beings and help to build our value system.
Therefore
, we should not opt them out simply due to a lack of interest.
Moreover
, studying various different
subjects
gives a person a wide range of career choices as well as a better career perspective. Nowadays, the job market is more competitive than before. Globalisation and economic development make those multinational companies not only require the candidate to have strong technical skills but
also
prefer hiring the one equipped with multi-language abilities. It is not uncommon that a lot of people feel less interested in those language
subjects
. But if we have learnt a
second
language during our school time, we would get a better chance to win our dream jobs. In conclusion, I believe the students would get benefits for studying a wide range of
subjects
rather than only studying those
subjects
which they are interested in.
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