Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays public debate has been going on over whether a

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of competition in

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should be encouraged. Some believe

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of

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is beneficial for

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while others believe that

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who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more valuable as a grown-up.

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, by encouraging a

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of competition in

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people anchorage them to pursue excellence.

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, by competing with one another challenges each other to do their best.

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,

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achieve better results at a minimum given time.

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, if other same-age kids are doing better, the kid

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less successful but has a competitive mindset will try to reach the same level as other kids or even exceed their level of success.

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, not only the child

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chasing the goals of others will improve, but his actions will motivate the other

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to do more.

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will provide a person as an adult additional motivation in seeking a higher position at work,

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encourages the growth of a person as an individual and ensures growth for the companies where fierce people work.

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, some say that by instilling a

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of

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we discourage

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from seeking a

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of corporation ar complementing and helping each other.

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with a competitive mindset are likely to ignore other traits like companionship, empathy, and generosity.

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making them less commonly accepted by society. Which might lead to them being sad, lonely or having no friends when they grow up. Because only, by teaching kids how to cooperate and compromise, do they learn to pay attention to others' feelings

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than their goals. In conclusion, by encouraging a

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of competition in childer, we encourage them to seek the overall goal much faster and more efficiently. Sadly

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with more competitive minds tend to dismiss feelings,

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being friendless as an adult.