Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays public debate has been going on over whether a

sense

of competition in

children

should be encouraged. Some believe

this

sense

of

competitiveness

is beneficial for

children

while others believe that

children

who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more valuable as a grown-up.

Firstly

, by encouraging a

sense

of competition in

children

people anchorage them to pursue excellence.

Children

, by competing with one another challenges each other to do their best.

Thus

,

children

achieve better results at a minimum given time.

For example

, if other same-age kids are doing better, the kid

that is

less successful but has a competitive mindset will try to reach the same level as other kids or even exceed their level of success.

As a result

, not only the child

that is

chasing the goals of others will improve, but his actions will motivate the other

children

to do more.

This

competitiveness

will provide a person as an adult additional motivation in seeking a higher position at work,

competitiveness

as

such

encourages the growth of a person as an individual and ensures growth for the companies where fierce people work.

On the other hand

, some say that by instilling a

sense

of

competitiveness

we discourage

children

from seeking a

sense

of corporation ar complementing and helping each other.

Children

with a competitive mindset are likely to ignore other traits like companionship, empathy, and generosity.

Thus

making them less commonly accepted by society. Which might lead to them being sad, lonely or having no friends when they grow up. Because only, by teaching kids how to cooperate and compromise, do they learn to pay attention to others' feelings

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than their goals. In conclusion, by encouraging a

sense

of competition in childer, we encourage them to seek the overall goal much faster and more efficiently. Sadly

children

with more competitive minds tend to dismiss feelings,

thus

being friendless as an adult.