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Many people use written language in less formal and relaxed way. Does this development have advantages and disadvantages

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Nowadays , many
people
 have begun to make written speech less formal and treat it as a friendly conversation and the main question is why is
this
 happening.
Firstly
,
this
 is starting to happen because a large percentage of young
people
 in everything simply cease to understand the meaning of formal communication in writing.The new generation , as the «zoomers» call them , believe that it is possible to communicate in writing as if
people
 are friends .
Thus
 , the level of formality is reduced.
This
 form of communication has both advantages and disadvantages .The advantage is that everyone is equal in correspondence , even if the director of the company writes to his subordinate . But there is
also
 a disadvantage.
For example
, the older generation of
this
 worship
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
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also
 called «boomers» can sometimes misunderstand or think that a person is illiterate if he writes in
this
 form. To sum up it seems to me that in the future all
people
 will communicate less formally because the new generation will grow and more and more
people
 will rewrite in
this
 form .
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  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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