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You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation.In your letter ● explain why you want to help with the renovations ● suggest what you can do to help ● say when you are available to start work

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Dear manager, I am ecstatic to read the news of renovating old school buildings at my location and I would like to offer a token of appreciation along with my little a bit of contribution from my end despite a huge investment from your end.
In addition
, I did my elementary school and higher studies at these mind-blowing schools only .
Moreover
, we want to give back to my mesmerizing schools and I strongly decided to pay a small amount from my pocket. As you know, these are very old buildings and most of them do not have proper library facilities.
Therefore
, I would like to pay to construct and upgrade the library books along with a few basic needs
such
 as fans, drinking water and a few moral stories books for our adorable kids. I can join you to start the work by
this
 month-end as I have a few other things need to complete at my home.
Hence
, please let me your`s availability to sit and make a plan to execute the action in a strategic way. I am always reachable over my phone and I am happy to answer or chat at any point in time for
this
 cause. I look forward to hearing your response to
this
 letter and I hope it will come soon. I cannot wait to see my school buildings with new colours and elegant designs. Yours faithfully Lakshmi.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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