More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In recent years, it has become far more normal for
people
to migrate to big cities for a better life, particularly in developing countries. However
, we have to be aware that city life usually brings some challenges, leading to living in a modern city with more difficulties. In my opinion, if governments
can provide those people
who live in urban with more convenient healthcare and education sources, this
situation would be improved.
There are some difficulties needed to be tackled if people
want to live an urban life. The most fundamental issue is that more people
take part in labour markets and fight for high-reward jobs
. At that time, people
need abundant knowledge and professional skills to make themselves stand out in the masses of competition, which indirectly increases the consumption of both time and energy. In addition
, it is hard for people
to attain limited medical and educational sources, especially in developing areas and nations. For example
, in China, many people
aim to acquire an opportunity of entering an elite school and thus
purchase an expensive house in the heart of the city. Nevertheless
, when more and more people
tend to do this
, the difficulty still arises.
However
, there are some manners that can be taken by governments
to alleviate the current situation. First
of all, governments
should increase the chance of jobs
and appeal to citizens to constantly study. In other words
, a huge labour market mitigates the fierce competition to some degree, while more abundant knowledge and more professional working skills promote their own competitiveness. Besides
, governments
are supposed to complete basic facilities and offer residents better healthcare and education. For example
, related departments and organizations ought to allocate more budgets to local schools and hospitals for extending their space and purchasing advanced machines. As a consequence, these facilities can accommodate more people
, increasing the chance of enjoying them.
In conclusion, people
who live in big cities are always not able to good jobs
, medicine and education, while this
case would be improved if governments
can offer more chances for jobs
and construct more basic industries.Submitted by 1998v7 on
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