Large companies use sporting events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Products

are

avertised

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advertised

in sporting

events

by big

companies

. To a certain

extent

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I agree that

this

has some negative impact

to

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sports

.

However

, I

also

think that it brings a lot of benefits. Admittedly, large

companies

using sporting

events

to promote their goods have some drawbacks. One of them is that unhealthy

products

have

opportunity

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to sponsor sporting

events

. Famous athletes often advertise for their sponsors and

this

particularly affected children because they prefer to follow their idols.

Consequently

, children consume unhealthy

products

more while they are not really aware of

negative

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the negative

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impact of these dangerous

products

on their health. Another drawback is

sport

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sports

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talents get high

salary

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salaries

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at early ages. When you have a huge amount of money, which might cause uncontrollable spending and

this

is easy to see in young people, who frequently lack

of

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financial management

skill

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and rarely think about saving. In fact, newspapers often report on young talents

fall

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falling

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into lavish lifestyles and

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drug

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dug

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drug

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addiction because of having too much money at a very young age. In my opinion, despite the aforementioned negatives, it

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also

aslo

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also

has many advantages to

sports

.

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Firstly

First

Firsly

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Firstly

, Clubs and teams in

sports

are given funding to continue operating. We know that maintaining a

sports

club or team

need

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a lot of

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expenditures

expentures

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expenses

and they

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usually

usualy

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usually

come from sponsors. If large

companies

don't spend money to promote their

products

in sporting

events

, clubs and teams in

sports

are going to disband to

lack

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of finance.

This

also

lead to organizers cannot organize sporting

events

due to there

are

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no clubs or team

join

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joining

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.

Secondly

, when sporting

events

are remained

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remain

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, it will

be bring

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bring

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attention to

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the sport

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sport

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sports

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, inspiring the

next

generation to play

sports

. In reality, in Vietnam, since

national

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the national

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football team of Vietnam achieve many

achievement

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achievements

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internationally, now we can see most

of

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Vietnamese

they

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love and play football everywhere. In conclusion,

although

big

companies

promoting their

products

in sporting

events

bring some negatives. it seems to me that

this

has more benefits.