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Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

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In
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 day and age, copying educational content matter has become a matter of great concern in some nations.
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 increasing competition among
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, but it can be controlled by making stringent rules and regulations. Amongst the major factors, the high-tech level of competition is perhaps the most contributing significant element.
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 want to achieve a high score in examinations to get a job in a reputed company
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, they are more likely to copyright
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 from books available in the library
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 of doing
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, 85% of pupils copied the material from books and previous journals. Not only
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, the advancement of technology is another reason. Schoolgoing
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, use Wikipedia at an alarming rate to accomplish their tasks without applying their own mind, and in many schools, it is a common trend to copyright the material to complete the assignments by using online sites
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 as medclinic.com and infopage.com which able to get good grades in the studies. Turning to solutions, institutions ought to maintain stringent rules and regulations against plagiarism, exemplify, as putting hefty fines on those who
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 from school for a year. By doing
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 of others.
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, education centres must ban the use of electronic devices: computers and mobile phones on study campuses,
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 apply their own minds in their studies.
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, higher authorities maintain a few rules and regulations on online sites to avoid the copy of subject matters. In conclusion, despite the fact that copyright infringement of academic
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 is a growing problem in different states and is a major concern we are facing today if appropriate actions are taken by the government and individuals, it can be resolved to a greater extent.
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In the introduction and conclusion, make sure to present a clear thesis statement and summarize the main points effectively. Structure the essay in a logical and cohesive manner, ensuring that each paragraph develops a clear main point with supporting examples and evidence. Ensure that the response is complete, providing relevant and comprehensive ideas with specific examples.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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  • to illustrate
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plagiarism
  • academic integrity
  • ethical issue
  • intellectual property
  • citation
  • referencing
  • academic misconduct
  • originality
  • ethical standards
  • unfair advantage
  • ethical guidelines
  • punitive measures
  • deterrence
  • academic dishonesty
  • critical thinking
  • time management
  • peer pressure
  • educational system
  • inadequate consequences
  • disciplinary action
  • information literacy
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