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Some people regard that we ought to spend money and time protecting wild animals.Others argue that it is better only to spend it on human populations.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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The line graph gives information on how the rate of unemployment was changing in 2 countries (
USA
 and
Japan
) over a seven-year
period
, from 1992 to 1999. Overall, at the beginning of the
period
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 there was a significant gap in the percentage of
workforce
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 between
Japan
 and
USA
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. On the one hand,
Japan
 has experienced steady growth in the proportion of its
workforce
. On the other, the US showed a stable decline over the seven-year
period
. In
March
 1993, there was a low value of the
workforce
 in
Japan
, around 2.4%, while in the US the figure showed
the
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 peak at over 7%. Until
March
 1995, the percentage of the
workforce
 in
USA
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the USA
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 was dropping sharply to almost 1.7% from
March
 1993, and made up around 5.4%, whereas the
workforce
 in
Japan
 was rising steadily until
March
 1996 and reached the point of 3.5%, which is 1.1% more in comparison from the beginning of the
period
. During
the
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1995 and 1996 in
USA
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figure
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 remained stable
on
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 about 5.5 % with a slight fluctuation, and after 1996 till 1999 was falling gradually and accounted for approximately 4.5%.
In contrast
,
Japan
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 value remained stable during 1996 and 1997, and from 1997
till
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 1999 was growing considerably and represented equal value as the US.
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