We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is sometimes argued that
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ought to just give their own society a hand. I firmly disagree with
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idea and I believe that we have to help
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as the possible whole of the world. there are some reasons why I am against the idea of helping
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just in your own country . today many
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do not consider boundaries and try to tackle problems all over the world and save
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from poverty .
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, affluent countries may have some concerns , but the problem in some poor countries are more serious than in affluent ones. helping
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countries is a priority .
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,
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in Africa suffer from hunger and various diseases .actually wealthy nation could save their life just by donating a small amount of money and providing vaccines and food for them .
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, many
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believe that it is so important to help
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in your neighbourhood and fellow citizens
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. Even in wealthy nations, there are some
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who live in the bad condition
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, many
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help them as well as the governments.
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, authorities have limited resources and they prefer to allocate
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budget for uplifting the living condition and well-being of their own society
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of others . In way of conclusion, while there are various ideas, I believe that we have to help as many
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as we can . it is a selfish way of thinking if we just help our own country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
  • expertise
  • international aid
  • dependency and development
  • sustainable solutions
  • local and global initiatives
  • community resilience
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