Environmental pollution has become one of the most serious issues in today's world. what are the causes of environmental pollution? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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Environmental
pollution
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is a common controversial
issues
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in
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modern time. There are two factors that
causes
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environmental
pollution
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as the number of vehicles
are increase
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and other is deforestation.In
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essay
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I discuss some possible
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. Our
environment
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is being polluted by human activities.
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and foremost nowadays the number of vehicles
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increase
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as a result
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total
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amount of co2 rise day by day.A large amount of greenhouse gas are
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for
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these the world temperature is changed and our
environment
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is harmful
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our planet.
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human cutting down all trees and the total number of greenery damage so deforestation is the main reason for environmental
pollution
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,our world is
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damage
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by human work and as a
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results
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we cannot live peacefully
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there
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so many
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that we face in
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.
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, if we take some steps to protect our planet
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as our government should
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of the negative effects
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environment
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pollution
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so that we can avoid
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problem.We must
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this
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type of
vehicles
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that
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safe for
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environment
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the environment
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Treeplantation
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Tree plantation
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and we plant more and more trees
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protect
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our world.
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, our government could use numerous educative methods to educate our citizens about
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aspect
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of
pollution
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. To conclude, if we ensure to educate our people about
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impact of environmental
pollution
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the
eart
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earth
is protect
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and for
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these
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we can lead a healthy and happier life.
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