In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Some nations motivate their students to take a sabbatical
year
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, it might help broaden the horizons of these learners, Linking Words
that is
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Conversely
, in as much as doing so have lots of advantages, the demerits are inevitable. Taking a Linking Words
year
to work or travel means that you will be a Use synonyms
year
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however
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