Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples .

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from
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more easily rather than learn from
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because it can directly give us information where the location we have
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a mistake
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,
then
we can fix it.
first
of all,
plethora
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a plethora
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of individuals
argue
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that learning
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through
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personal
skill
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more
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effective
instead
of
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through
trhough
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through
books
.
Hence
,
people
prefer to choose
practice
on their subject because it can give more
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knowledge
knowlage
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knowledge
and information.
For instance
,
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people
poeple
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people
who want to learn
driving
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a car
they
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tend to go to the
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professional
professionals
proffesional
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professional
to
practice
how to drive.
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result
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they can
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receive
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receive
a
lot
of
experience
while driving a car.
second
of all, some
people
think that
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theoretical
are
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important as
a
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fundamental to
practice
.
However
, at the same time we need
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it
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,
people
need to
practica
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because it can lead
some
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improvement
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improvement
for them.
For example
,
student
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students
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have spent a
lot
of time
to study
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studying
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IELTS,
many
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and many
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books
that they have read, without
practice
they can not realize where they have a mistake,
moreover
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pupils can fix their problems. In conclusion,
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knowledge
knowlage
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knowledge
will be gain not only from reading
books
but
also
from
experience
.
Therefore
, a
lot
of
persons
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think that
experience
have
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has
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more beneficial rather than
books
.
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