Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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recent world, the number of global corporations has increased and their power became huge.

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overall

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and natural environments

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account, many people believe that those multinational going concerns give negative impacts

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the environment.

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idea as nowadays, they can

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be power sources to reverse the condition of our environmental issues using their vast resources and human powers. The

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accusation to those big corporations is their

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standardize

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products all over the world and

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, develop global networks to transport their goods.

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build manufacturing factories in many developing countries by cutting down trees and destroying fields. They

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cars by trucks, ships, and planes. Those transportation emit CO2, which

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our earth.

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, recent global

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their products but in many

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they expand their

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online and do not directly

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effect

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nature in negative ways.

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, using their huge financial resources, they can become leaders to run

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in an eco-friendly environment.

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, Starbucks changed their coffee cups from plastic to environmentally friendly paper cups. Amazon started to use bicycles for delivery

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of cars. As

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power to make an ecologically beneficial trend. In conclusion, I believe globalization and global

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are not necessarily bad for

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nature. While the

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business

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corporations can lead ecology movements.

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