The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the globalization process, numerous giant online businesses hold private details from millions of customers worldwide. In my opinion, both advantages and disadvantages might exist in

this

circumstance, but I reckon the demerits will surpass the gains.  On the one hand, it can bring several outstanding advantages.

First

of all, with the development of technology, there are a lot of ways to keep in touch with relatives and friends when travelling or going abroad via Messenger, Zalo and so on.

In addition

, a great number of valuable courses, documents and information can be assessed via the Internet with ease, which offers more flexibility for learners.

Last

but not least,

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to transfer money by using a variety of payments like credit cards, so sales and purchases are now facilitated and possible worldwide. 

On the other hand

, the concern about the leak of personal details and identity theft has been surging. The

first

reason for

this

is that the ignorant,

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easily provide their private information to

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bad

people

via the Internet. If fallen into the wrong hands

such

as cyber criminals and hackers, technology can be used to cause harm, which can invade our privacy and compromise our safety.  To conclude, there are both merits and demerits of

people

's details being handled by plenty of online companies and organizations.

However

, I believe that each individual should take into consideration using the Internet that fulfils

people

's needs