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With rise of e-books comes the decline in paper book. Some people sees this as a good step forward while other do not . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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Nowadays, with the help of
technology
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development
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 many aspects of people's life
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 changed. with the emergence of digital
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advance
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advances
 and technology in education and study fields, it can be seen that there is a significant tendency to e-
books
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instead
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 of traditional ways.
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, every modern advancement
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 both benefits and drawbacks but I think in
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 case its advantages are sizeable more.
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 with, technology has positive impacts on methods and quantity of reading
books
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 and studying among people worldwide.
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, one of the most important effects is
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 easily available.
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, the number of eager who are interested in finding different
books
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, a literature student who has to study a lot of classic pieces or
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 before
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 phenomenon must borrow a heavy book from
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 and carrying and keeping was genuinely difficult.
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, they can have all of them on their phones now. Another point is that it can be mentioned that
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 of electronic
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 has noticeable drawbacks, particularly in the printing industry and
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 relative occupations.
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, the large number of
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a worker
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 who makes a living from some relevant book publishment will lose their work as
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 of the reduction in the number of published
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. In conclusion, it is evident, making progress mostly have both side, dark and clear which is unavoidable. Correspondingly, we can make a decision and
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 judge a phenomenon, depending on its advantages and disadvantages. In
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 regard, in my opinion, e-
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books'
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books books
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 benefits are remarkable more than their drawbacks.
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