You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Dear John, I am writing
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letter to get your attention towards missing my project deadline so, our company had loose our valuable client.
Moreover
, I apologise for
this
type of my miss communication and
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of attention towards my work. I should pay my
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penalty
for
this
type of behaviour. Considering all
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negative
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the negetive
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negetive
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negative
points, I am writing
this
letter to tell you
that
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what
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exactly
exectly
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exactly
heppans
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happens
happen
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me.
Firstly
, on
10th
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of November, I was travelling to my home from our office. I was on the bike
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at
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speed
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a speed
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of around 50
kilometer
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per hour. Suddenly one car came from behind it
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hit
hited
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me strongly and loosen my balance and I get an accident. Since that day I was in hospitalized and released
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two days ago. I heard
news
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about my project which is missed
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my
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me.
Lastly
, I want to
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clarify
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that,
next
time I will take care of my driving and
also
do communication regarding my
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schedule
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schedule
to
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with my
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colleague
college
collegue
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colleagues
. Not only
this
but
also
I can submit my daily progress report to my project manager.
Hence
I will not
be forgot
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my
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deadline
of
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my work. Yours Faithfully, Peter
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