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news editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. what factors do you think influence their decision? Do we used to bed news ? would it be better if more good news was reported ?

#news #editors #broadcast #television #print #newspaper #factors #influence #decision
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It became regular for
editors
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 to choose
information
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 shared on television or written in newspapers. Factors of their decision mainly would be to make
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 more catchy and to draw more attention. Often it appears that most of the broadcasted
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are
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 negative,
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however
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 the emergence of more positive
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 would lift the spirit of society and create a good frame of mind for the day.
Editors
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 are constantly seeking
for
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sensations, so the community would be interested in the reported
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.
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in
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television
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 some unexpected and fascinating
information
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 is shown. Nowadays, most journalism education programs involve the fact that
information
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 should be catchy. Celebrities' divorces,
disasters
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and disasters
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 in the world,
that
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the
information
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editors
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 prefer to print in newspapers. Often, only the most discussed
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are
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 considered as successful. It becomes regular to see
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 broadcasting catastrophes and disasters being highlighted. It creates a wrong view
on
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of
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 things.
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, it was widely discussed that as a consequence of showing in the
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 only how
aircrafts
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aircraft
 crash, society tends to believe that it is dangerous,
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 it is the safest type of transportation.
Increase
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An increase
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of
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 the number of good
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 would possibly make people happier. As life is giving complications by itself, bad
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 creates a negative impact emphasizing people's worries and problems. In conclusion,
editors
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 tend to choose captivating
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 over
a
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regular but
with
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positive context. As
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 has an impact on human mental processes, broadcasting more
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 that contains pleasing content would improve people's quality of life by creating a more positive environment.
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