You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologise for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide some suggestions about an occasion which happened

last

week in the street park for increasing the number of accidents in the Sandwood area.

First

of all, I like the set-up of the event which way people got together in the area and make unity come forward in order to mitigate

this

deteriorating problem.

Besides

, the arrangement of water and some snacks by the organizer in the front entrance with colourful flowers was admirable.

However

, I would like to say if there are different sections with light activities enrolled

year, they may enlarge more flavour and look more organized.

In addition

instead

of serving snacks, pizza is the cheapest option. So, those people who do not consider coming might prefer to come and listen to the speech which can change their perspective towards things. I look forward to your reply. Thanks for giving me the time to review my opinions Faithfully Kudu

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7 paragraphs

161 words

9.00

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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