Is it better to have a lot of friends than it is to have just a few friends.

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social animals, and they need companionship from an early age. We all are interdepended on one another because we all want some support system. In my opinion, it is better to have more

friends

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. I will explain some compelling reasons to hold

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viewpoint in the following essay.

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, from

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conomical

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economical

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perspective, having many

friends

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will open up the door of opportunities in terms of job, education, marriage and so on.

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, I have lots of

friends

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, and some of them helped me in getting a good job in my field of study. In the same way, My sister is an extrovert and makes

friends

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with people where ever she goes.

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summer when she was on

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trip to

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areas of Pakistan, she become

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with a local girl;

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, that girl helped my sister to get a scholarship

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one of the best universities in Pakistan. So, we can find opportunities if we extend our friend circle.

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, if a person has more

friends

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then

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he/she will be able to get good advice from them and learn

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array of knowledge from them. When we connect with many people we learn a lot of things

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for

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example, I have

friends

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from different countries and we chat on skype on weekends, and I have learned many astonishing and amazing things about their country and culture that helped me to broaden my horizon.

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, whenever I am upset I discuss my problems with my

friends

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and

usually

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I get reasonable advice that really works. In conclusion, making many

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is not a negative trait of our character, it is a blessing to have so many good people in our lives that make our life happy,

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, if our social circle would be

huge

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then

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rate

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of getting opportunities would be higher.

Rushna AnwarTue Nov 22 2022

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

308 words

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