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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

#people #difficulty #diet
Actually, excessive weight and obesity represent
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 death causes around the world. Because society cannot establish healthy habits and nature feed routines in their daily lives.
Nevertheless
, if the
food
 industry creates
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massive
masive
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massive
 advertising about unhealthy meals that make a big change in a consumer mindset that
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get
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 some solutions to
this
 problem. Is a scientific fact, that fast
food
 is one of the principal causes because people cannot eat
healthy
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healthily
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, it depends
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 country but normally fast
food
 franchises
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 around the globe. Whereas existing an unhealthy and cheap source of bad
food
 the people will stay on the wrong diet. That increase when big companies invest millions of
dollars
 in massive marketing, social media, and television advertising campaigns.
On the other hand
, today average employees cannot have enough time in their daily work to work out or do some exercise above all office workers a big part of the day is a seat at their desks.
Also
, can be a heartbroken situation, high healthy
food
 prices. Because standard society is limited to getting some of those.
For example
, a fresh fish pound costs around forty
dollars
 meanwhile a can of tuna less than five
dollars
, which makes sense when actually the average salary is around twenty
dollars
 per hour. To conclude, a great solution is banning the irresponsible massive unhealthy, and liar advertising campaigns from big franchises of fast
food
.
Also
, support in society, workouts, and best diet plans at schools and universities.
Finally
, stimulate organic markets and farmers to massive produce cheap and organic foods that encourage new conscious consumers.
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