Buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there are many methods for ordering things and goods from markets. Using networks for shopping is becoming widespread, in spite of the positive and negative. I totally agree that the positives are more than the negatives. In

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essay, I will discuss and give the reasons to approve that. First of all, in recent times, everyone has been involved in online shopping in any way. Because of that, there are positives to shopping by using networks.

Firstly

, it saves time.

For example

, normally, if someone wants to buy a T-shirt, he should walk or drive to the shops. But in online shopping, he

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to go anywhere. The only thing that he should do,

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. In fact, it is saving time and effort.

Secondly

, items and goods variety. In the network, it can be found many types and varieties of goods and items, because it is an international market.

On the other hand

, there are negative sides to online shopping

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as, is difficult to assure quality. Because the shopping relays only on pictures and photos and these are not enough for assuring.

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, the colours, size and how the good

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quality factors cannot be assured. The second con is waiting for receiving. It is known that, after online purchasing, we have to wait until the items arrive.

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could take time maybe for days. In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to network shopping. In my opinion, advantages overcome disadvantages.

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The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping, but the ideas lack development, and some points are unclear.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present, but they lack complexity and structure. The essay does not follow a clear structural pattern, so the flow of ideas is confusing.

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