Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

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Nowadays, there are lots of crimes happening in our world. some folks have thought that there should be the same judgements for every sort of violation. And another part of society has another view which is the background of the issue, and the cause for doing it should be taken when issuing the judgement.
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essay will discuss
both
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views.
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, applying fixed punishments for every type of
crime
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is not fair, because it is known that, each
crime
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has won reasons.
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, if
someone
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killed
someone
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and another
one
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does the same
crime
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, naturally, the background of
both
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crimes is different. The
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killer maybe he trying to protect himself.
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, if the government fix the retribution according to a type of
crime
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,
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will encourage bad people to do the
crime
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.
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, if there are two persons, the
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one
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stoles 100$ and the
second
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one
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stoles 1000$ in
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case
both
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of them will have the same punishments because
both
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of them are committing the same type of
crime
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. The
second
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view, is retribution according to the criminal background.in
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way, each
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will get fair.
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, if
someone
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stoles shop in order to feed himself because he does not have money.In
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case, there is a reasonable reason why he did that.On the opposite, if
someone
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did the same case for fun, of course, the punishment should be different. In conclusion, there are reasons and logic behind
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views.In my ,opinion
both
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views can be considered and that depends on the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrent
  • Judicial process
  • Deliberating
  • Consistent
  • Humane
  • Intent
  • Background
  • Personal circumstances
  • Severity
  • Rehabilitation
  • Sentencing
  • Recidivism
  • Public perception
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