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Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

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In modern times,
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 jam has become highly controversial. Centralization and urbanism are liable for
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 and will be able to get rid of
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 problem through decentralization. In
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 jams. Generally speaking, there are several reasons why people believe that
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 jam is a terrible issue these days and overpopulation is the main cause of
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. Perhaps the main reason why people are in
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 of overpopulation is that people are increasing day by day and they are buying more cars.
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, the richest persons are becoming more richest and they are buying more than one. Vehicle companies are producing a variety of models of cars which attract more customers and they buy more. But our road infrastructure is not ready to take a huge amount of vehicles.
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, under-developing countries are facing
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 problem. Though is a terrible problem there is some effective solution to
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 issue. One way to tackle
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 is to encourage inhabitants to decentralize. If peoples get decentralized
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 the vehicle will be
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. Huge of transport will not create a rush in a few places, they will spread widely. Another possible solution is that we can develop our infrastructure by developing roads, bridges, and overbridges. When the infrastructure will be able to take more vehicles
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 congestion will be reduced. We can
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 develop our water bus system and enlarge our air transport
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 road transport will be easier. In conclusion, Though the
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 rush is the worst thing,
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, it has several solutions
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. Our urban places would be more inhabitable by reducing these problems.
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