Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information which is available about ways to have a healthy, balanced diet.

Over the years, health issues have become more severe. It is considered that the vast majority of
population
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consume
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consumes
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junk
food
instead
of following a balanced diet. In
this
essay, the causes of
this
issue will be analysed with relevant solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is that natural and organic products are more expensive than fast
food
.
The most
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the
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people
around the world are not able to afford proper nutrition because they do not make enough money to spend on healthy
food
. In my country,
for example
, a burger in a
fast
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fast-food
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food
restaurant will cost twice cheaper than a bowl of soup. The solution
of
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this
problem is for the government to reduce the prices
on
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basic balanced products and pay more attention
on
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this
. Another problem is that a great number of
people
do not have plenty of time to spend on cooking.
That is
to say,
people
often have a lack of time because of work and other daily routine duties. They are not able to stick to a balanced diet because it is easier to buy frozen pizza or
burger
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and just heat it up in a microwave than stand for hours behind the stove. To tackle
this
issue, every store should start to sell cooked dishes
such
as salads and soups at an affordable price. To sum up
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, nowadays
people
are more likely to consume unhealthy
food
due to their busy lifestyle and lack of time,
therefore
they are facing a big amount of health problems.
However
, by making healthy
food
more affordable, governments can encourage
people
to eat right.
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