Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language.

These days, more and more
people
starting to learn foreign
languages
. While some
people
believe that the only benefit
in
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learning it is to be able to
travel
to or
work
in a foreign
country
, others prefer to say that there are more reasons why someone should learn a foreign
language
. It is certainly true that for the majority of
people
the basic advantage of knowing
other
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language
is to be able to
travel
. While nowadays
traveling
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become more and more popular, knowing of
foreign
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language
can make it more affordable. No matter how long or how far away you want to
travel
, knowing the
language
of your destination
country
will increase your confidence and help
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to
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in the new
country
.
Otherwise
, coming to
other
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country
could become
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torture without basic knowledge of
it’s
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native
language
. The
second
most popular reason to learn foreign
languages
is to
work
in a foreign
country
.
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no
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doubt companies looking for candidates with
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good hard skills and high education level but a line in a resume about knowledge
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foreign
languages
can make you more valuable and help you to excel among
the
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others.
However
, there are so many other benefits of learning foreign
languages
.
Firstly
, the
language
of every
country
not only help
people
to communicate with each other but store and guard
it’s
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culture. So by learning
new
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language
we not only start to understand foreigners but discover all secrets and nuances of different cultures.
Secondly
, it is not a secret that a significant part of
world’s
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classic works of literature or movies was translated
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a lot of
languages
so everyone can enjoy them. Unfortunately, because of adaptation usually it loses so many nuances of the original
work
.
That is
why knowing the
language
of the original
work
gives you the
benefits
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to
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better
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the original author’s ideas.
Therefore
, I believe that learning new
languages
can not only be helpful in your resume or when you go to
travel
but
also
help in
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understanding of different cultures.
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  • cross-cultural communication
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  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
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