Despite health warning a large number of people continue to smike all over the world. Why should we concern about this? What solutions would you suggest.
It is true that a wide number of individuals are smoking worldwide even after health warnings. It is a matter of concern nowadays for human beings and there is a need of taking useful actions to ameliorate detrimental impact on human beings directly or indirectly.
Turning to the possible remedies, the most effective measure could be family support. Family should provide emotional support to the
this
problem.
To begin
with, there are the following reasons why we should think about this
hurdle. Firstly
, smoking not only put a detrimental effect on the health of smokers
but also
on the health of passive smokers
they become victims of diseases such
as lung cancer, and asthma which decrease
the life expectancy of humans and Change the verb form
decreases
increase
the mortality rate. Change the verb form
increases
Thus
, this
has a
major cause of society's collapse. Apart from Add a missing verb
been a
this
, it is futile to spend on smoking. To explain this
, who are smokers
suffer from financial issues as they spend a hefty sums
of money on smoking and they are unable to fulfil the basic needs of their families. Correct the article-noun agreement
a hefty sum
hefty sums
Therefore
, they live in extreme poverty. Examples can be seen in India, where fathers of children are smokers
and their children either suffer from starvation or do not get a valuable education. Consequently
, smoking putsAdd an article
a
smokers
so that they can leave the bad habits of smoking. To elaborate this
, because sometimes people suffer from depression then
they get addicted to such
habits in order to rejuvenate their minds. If they have strong bonding with near and dear ones then
they will avoid smoking. Another pragmatic action may be taken by authorities, they must wake up these people from their slumber. As they either can ban smoking or impose a tax on smoking. What could be a better example than Italy? where the government of a nation has put restrictions on smoking as well as given
them Change the form of the verb
giving
a prison sentences
? Correct the article-noun agreement
a prison sentence
prison sentences
As a result
, they accomplish their goal to resolve this
problem.
In conclusion, it is pivotal for human beings to show concern about smoking issues and after taking useful actions this
menace can be solved.Submitted by Naziathind05 on
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