Write a letter to a friend asking for his help to make a website. In your letter, you should: • describe what kind of website you want • say when you want the website to be done • explain how important the website is to you.

#friend #website

Dear Monica, How are you? I'm writing

this

letter to ask for help in building a

website

for my online business. I need help in developing

e-commerce

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an e-commerce

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website

for my products to

sale

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sell

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. I have all the designs and requirements ready to start work, but I only have minimal knowledge

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building a

website

. The reason I am asking you

this

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for this

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help is I know you are an expert in making a

website

and have plenty of experience. I have come up with

this

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the

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idea of selling online so that it would be

rent free

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rent-free

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. So, I am planning to launch

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a website

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website

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the website

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month end as Christmas is coming it would attract many customers. If you would

can

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apply

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give me

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the handover

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handover

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by December 10th that would be really great.

This

is so important to me because I have invested all my savings in

this

hoping to be

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a success

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success

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successful

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Also

, I have taken

loan

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a loan

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from

bank

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the bank

a bank

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to start

this

business and I need to pay interest every month. My parents are pressuring me to start my career so that I should start living on my own. I hope you will help me and I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Rachel.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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