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Write a letter to the government about the lack of sports facilities in your hometown for people of your age. In your letter, you should tell: • what facilities you want • why you want them • what suggestions you can give

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to tell you about the sports facilities in my hometown which need improvements. We need a few items to play Cricket like balls, bats, and wickets and a few safety items like helmets, and knee caps.
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 to these, We
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 need
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clean
ground
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 to practice for matches as the
ground
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 we are using now is not proper to run. Not only cricket many students interested in Basketball, but there is no
ground
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 in our hometown. The main reason for asking for these facilities is there are many students who can really achieve their dream. I hope you have heard
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 news,
last
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 year two
people
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 got selected for National Cricket matches from our hometown.
This
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 achievement really motivated many
people
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 here to participate in sports. I would
also
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 like to suggest that, it would be really helpful for
people
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 if you allocate one full-time coach to
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 academy. So, they can manage all the items and
ground
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.
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, by appointing a coach here there will be many
people
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 who will take coaching here itself rather than going to cities. I hope you would take the necessary action on
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. Yours faithfully, Rachel Green
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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