Some prople say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Advertising became the soul of the trade. Some people say advertising is very successful at persuading us to buy

things

, while others believe that it became so common that no one is paying attention to it. I think advertising has

important

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role in convincing us to buy

things

. For most

companies

, the consumer's mind became the area of interest, where the

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advertisment

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advertising

companies

focus all the effort trying to get

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the consumer

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consumer

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consumer's

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conscious and subconscious

mind

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mind's

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attention. Since many

companies

start to hire neuroscientists and psychological

behavioral

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scientist

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scientists

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in order to know consumer's

brain

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, profits start rising steadily. To illustrate,

iphone

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iPhone

and

ipad

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iPad

users became emotionally attached to apple company, and they will buy their new products regardless

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of its

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its

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their

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new features, and if it is worth buying or not.

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, seeing too many advertisements minimizes their effect. Nowadays many

companies

introduce

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different

differtent

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different

types of products and all these

companies

use

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different

diiferent

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different

types of

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advertising

advertisment

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, so because of the huge number of

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

242 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some prople say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays countries are reducing the cost of air travel as compared to the past. While some argue this will result in a negative outcome, others believe it will be positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Use relevant examples.