Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, television has a great impact on kids' behaviour. Some parents are not fully aware of what children watching and how they are affected by
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reason, I totally agree that social media and other factors contribute to violence and an increase in vulgarlgar language used by teens recently. Linking Words
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, children in the early stages give attention to the colourful programs they are watching regardless of the matershownwn. Linking Words
For example
, some cartoons reveal action scenes in a comedy way that makes the child laugh and want to try it in real life .Linking Words
As a result
,it may lead to unexpected injuries and life-threatening .According to these problems, I believe that we should review all materials introduced to our kids' especially toddlers before letting them watch these scenes.
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, we face another serious issue with Facebook live broadcasts. Linking Words
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kind of video is out of control. Linking Words
For instance
, many teenagers suffer from mental problems when they watch people committing suicide live because they are depressed . Linking Words
Moreover
,recent psychological studies concerned with teen behaviour in the USA showed that 67% of teens are ready to die in the same way affected by what are they watching when they suffer from altered mood. Linking Words
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,we should enhance teenagers' self-awareness to let them judge and evaluate what they are watching to avoid more violence and bad reactions.
In conclusion, I believe violence has been increasing due to these uncensored materials. Linking Words
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, people's bad behaviour is raised due to these videos. Linking Words
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,the government should find a solution to stop these shows. Linking Words
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, parents should monitor their kids' reactions and attitudes after watching or playing games including fighting scenes.Linking Words
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