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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
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 a convenience that we see popping up more and more around us these days. I have seen these being used in daily
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 around me even very recently.
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, I was recently at the airport to travel from the east coast to the west coast of the US. While there, a passenger in line before me at the luggage
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 had his phone out and was talking to the attendants using his phone. On paying closer attention I realized, he was using
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 to understand what they said and to respond back to them. It took some effort on both sides, but in the end, it worked!
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 making peoples' lives easier on a regular basis. Witnessing
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 got me thinking - what would have happened in the absence of
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 service being available literally on the tips of our fingers
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 In the absence of
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 easy access to technology as we have today
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, it has come down to one thing - the human capacity to learn and communicate in more than one
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. Coming from a multicultural background where none of my
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 spoke the same
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 as me, it was inevitable that I would be exposed to multiple
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 since childhood.
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 is a reality for most metropolitan cities around the world. When I was three years old and could communicate to some degree in my mother tongue or native
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, my father ensured I
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 learned another one of our National
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 that
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 prevalent in the region. By the time I was six-seven years old, I could conveniently speak
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two
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. Meanwhile, in school, I was
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exposed to the English alphabet
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 to the two other
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 which made it easy to learn and understand English too. I can categorically say that knowing all three
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 made my
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 infinitely easier for me since we moved around a lot due to my father's work arrangements. Later on, during my college days, I met my best friend of eighteen years and was exposed to her native
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 or mother tongue and since
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 have picked up a passing knowledge of the
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 as well. The movies and plays around us while young used multiple
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 too and
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 I have a passing knowledge of six
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 today.
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 knowledge not only makes communicating a breeze for me in most areas
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 my country,
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 keeps my brain active. In conclusion, I believe while
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 definitely make
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 easier for us on different occasions, being bilingual, trilingual, or a polyglot serves to make
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 interesting and easy at the same time. Truly understanding and speaking a
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 brings to light so many nuanced facets of an entire culture surrounding the
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 which cannot be translated through
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translation
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. It has been proven that learning multiple
languages
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 helps keep the human brain adaptable and flexible - all marks of a young and active mind. From my personal experiences, I believe that the
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 serve as a quick solution to the
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 barrier for people in general, learning a
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 brings
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a level of richness to
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 experience of
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 as a whole.
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 should
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 not be considered as a replacement for learning a
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 but as an aide to learning a new skill.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Appreciation
  • Cognitive Flexibility
  • Idiomatic Expressions
  • Career Advancement
  • Multilingual
  • Proficiency
  • Empathy
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Native Speaker Fluency
  • Colloquialisms
  • Language Acquisition
  • Immersive Experience
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