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In some societies it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine- conventional and alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, most
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the
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people
 are becoming spend much
time
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 exercises and
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 on what they eat. Lately, pre-emptive medicine is important to
the
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people
 who attempt to
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 healthy. While some
people
 believe that living
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 way head to
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 life.
However
, I don't agree with
this
 point. In the
first
 place, we are living in so busy situations day to day. Because of that, we need to be
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 in every
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circumstances
circumstance
circcumstanes
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circumstance
. One of the
example
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people
is people
ispeople
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is people
, who have a lot of work to do, eat fast
foods
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.
Moreover
, they eat lately because of their busy lifestyle.
On the other hand
,
people
 choose
transports
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, to be on
time
, to get
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 office or home
instead
 of walking. There is
also
, humans must dedicate
time
 to
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 health. In the past few years, focusing on health is being decreased
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for
gor
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 the reason that more and more
people
 are focusing on their
career
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.
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prevertative
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preventative
preventive
 medicine has become the most important thing
among
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 everyone. To sum up, in
this
 situation,
which
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people
 consider their career more significant than their health and fitness, dedicating
time
 to their
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 necessary activity. Because everyday normal lifestyle can not be enough to stay fit and healthy.
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