Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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have positive effects on education, while others think

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will hurt

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more convenient to learn something.

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firmly support the previous notion. Nowadays, education became more flexible and versatile. There are different learning methods that help you learn the lesson faster. So there are

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that help with learning, but many

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can not control their time on the

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spoil their health. So learning without a

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will be healthy and will not cause any dependency.

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learning can develop

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creativity and intelligence

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, books and other teaching methods can not give

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progress as the

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has bad health effects and can become addictive

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if teachers or parents control the

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smarter. Since the person can find any information

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easier to learn by

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because all information is easy to obtain and pupils spend less time.

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we gave the assignment to make a presentation to one group given to make a presentation on paper and another group on the

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. the group that made the presentation on the

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showed more different information. To conclude,

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training is more versatile and more convenient than without a

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, people should monitor sitting at the

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. Because there could be negative health consequences from being on the

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for a long time.