Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that
,
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health
is crucial to every country. It is argued that free medical services
should be free to the masses, whether or not the newest medical supplies are, expensive to be made available. This
essay agrees that,
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government
should provide citizens with Add an article
the government
qualitative
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quality
health
services
.
In the first
place, just the proper care can save a
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millions
from dying. Change to singular
million
For instance
, if the current trend of free treatment is well managed, with a
regular patient Correct article usage
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follow up
, allowing a desirable outcome, there will not be a need to purchase expensive supplies in the Add a hyphen
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health
facilities and we can save several people
lives. Change noun form
people's
Also
, free medical services
will help reduce cases of illnesses aggravating. Most serious illnesses are managed with high-priced drugs. Consequently
, if patients can obtain free access to untied health
services
, they can easily get themselves treated before their circumstance
become worse. For Fix the agreement mistake
circumstances
this
reason, health
control should be free.
What is more, it is undeniable that,
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to provide
a free medical facility is a significant way to predict Change the verb form
provides
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health-related
health related
issues. It's a good approach to overcome Add a hyphen
health-related
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health-related
health related
challenges and make Add a hyphen
health-related
people
appeals
healthy. Correct subject-verb agreement
appeal
However
, beggarly people
daily facing health
challenges even they
don't know how to become well. Correct word choice
if they
For example
, India provide
free medical checkups supplying insurance policies in Canada, which has free medical for all diseases and diagnosis.
To conclude, despite the financial circumstances government contribute Change the verb form
provides
medical
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to medical
services
, but not fully. If government overcome the challenges and impart medical
fully, it will be helpful for all poor and middle-class Replace the word
medicine
people
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