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what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

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Nowadays, All over the world roads are full of vehicles, especially in main cities. For many people, Bizzy with moving here and there for work, education, and requirements.
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, there are both advantages and disadvantages to deciding to do
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. In
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 and some of the challenges to
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over come
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by looking at the positives of taking general
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 facilities for their day to days work. One of the main advantages of
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 air pollution
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 since it moves with very many
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people
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people
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evehicle
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vehicle
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 is that
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people
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people
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 one vehicle
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instead
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hundred
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personal
 vehicles,
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amount
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the amount
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 of toxic
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gases
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gases
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 as Hydrogen
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sulphite
, Carbon
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monoxide
 and carbo dioxide
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releasing
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the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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 will be dramatically very less.
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keep
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the environment
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 natural way and will be able to
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breath
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breathe
 fresh pure air for
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last
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 full people who
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are not
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are not
 financially strong to buy a personal car and maintain it like continuing purchasing
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fuel and other
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related
 parts. Take poor families who live around you without personal vehicles and how they
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many school students are used public
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 the other side of the argument, public
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 can be slower than travelling using
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personal
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personal
 cars. To be more precise public
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prescribed
 speed limits and
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the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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to
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 most of the
station
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stations
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 to collect
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passengers
passangers
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passengers
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us
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 A public bus travelling from
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the main
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 city to
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the country
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countryside
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country side
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 and how many places it stopped
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passengers
passangers
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passengers
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so
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 on as an example.
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think
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 twice before
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use
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 more occasions. Another issue is that some public
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 crews play too loud music forcing the passenger
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passenger
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passengers
passanger
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dnt
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don't
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vent
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opportunity
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the oppertunity
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oppertunity
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opportunity
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silent
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 and peacefully. Even they
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions
  • inequality
  • congestion
  • economic feasibility
  • subsidies
  • infrastructure
  • overcrowding
  • commute
  • incentivize
  • service quality
  • reinvest
  • equitable access
  • fiscal responsibility
  • peak hours
  • public subsidy
  • taxpayer burden
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