Unpaid Community service should be a compulsory part of the high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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the education
program
because it will grow the high schooler’s empathy and compassion within the
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, the course has to be monitored carefully to ensure that it will run appropriately.
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For instance
, when the students work for charity
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, improving their neighbourhood could be a similar story, these young people
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society
. It is necessary because,
recently many high schoolers are just living in their virtual world called “the Internet”.
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as parents, local public figures, local organizations, and so on. So, the integrated community
program
could be implemented well,
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the educational
such
as empathy, compassion, and tolerance, so the students can adapt easier in
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in the future. While the monitoring mechanism should be conducted not only by teachers but also
by the local public figures that have influence in the
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