Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative.

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These days, not only in my country but

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in other countries, advertising is increasing day by day and

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will definitely affect people's lifestyles.

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, it has its own drawbacks and benefits. In

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essay, it will be considered about it with examples. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that we can now use as much advertising as we want for our products and every

production

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product

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needs

announcement

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an announcement

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to increase its value and sell and it is becoming popular through social media.

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, the book of the famous lawyer Otabek Makhamov sold 15 million through advertising, which brought him a good profit.

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is especially necessary for businessmen because they sell their

productions

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products

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through advertising.

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, recently, a new store opened in my hometown and before

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it did not make much profit because it did not advertise. So, they advertised their productions,

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and as

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a result, it increased

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income

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in come

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income

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, one of the disadvantages is that not all of them are reliable.

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, I saw a new advertisement about an education

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and wanted to participate.

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, I went

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there but it was not as good and quality as advertised. After

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I believed that not all announcements are trustworthy.

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, it should be understandable to the public,

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otherwise

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some people may misunderstand. In conclusion, a lot of money is spent on advertising, if

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announcement is of good quality, it is useful to

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the populations

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populations

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population

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, if it is not of good quality, it is useless. In my opinion, every production needs

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an announcement

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announcement

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announcements

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to grow.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

267 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

advertising
positive effects
negative effects
individuals
businesses
awareness
information
entertainment
discounts
promotions
job opportunities
increased sales
profits
brand visibility
recognition
competitive advantage
product diversification
service diversification
influence
consumer behavior
unrealistic standards
beauty
invasion of privacy
financial pressure
high costs
misleading practices
deceptive practices
negative publicity
reputation damage
increased competition
balancing
ethical advertising
responsible advertising

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