Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative.
These days, not only in my country but
also
in other countries, advertising is increasing day by day and this
will definitely affect people's lifestyles. Also
, it has its own drawbacks and benefits. In this
essay, it will be considered about it with examples.
On the one hand, one of the advantages is that we can now use as much advertising as we want for our products and every production
needs Replace the word
product
announcement
to increase its value and sell and it is becoming popular through social media. Correct article usage
an announcement
For example
, the book of the famous lawyer Otabek Makhamov sold 15 million through advertising, which brought him a good profit. This
is especially necessary for businessmen because they sell their productions
through advertising. Replace the word
products
For instance
, recently, a new store opened in my hometown and before that
it did not make much profit because it did not advertise. So, they advertised their productions, Add a comma
,that
as
a result, it increased Correct word choice
and as
their
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they're
they are
Correct your spelling
income
in come
.
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income
On the other hand
, one of the disadvantages is that not all of them are reliable. For example
, I saw a new advertisement about an education center
and wanted to participate. Change the spelling
centre
Also
, I went to
there but it was not as good and quality as advertised. After Remove the preposition
apply
that
I believed that not all announcements are trustworthy. Add a comma
,that
Besides
, it should be understandable to the public, otherwise
some people may misunderstand.
In conclusion, a lot of money is spent on advertising, if Add a comma
,otherwise
this
announcement is of good quality, it is useful to Correct article usage
the populations
populations
, if it is not of good quality, it is useless. In my opinion, every production needs Fix the agreement mistake
population
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an announcement
announcement
to grow.Fix the agreement mistake
announcements
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