If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
Many
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their childhood dream. Change preposition
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Me
me
, I dreamed to become a doctor when I was a kid. Correct pronoun usage
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Therefore
, if I have a second
chance to change my study
, I want to study
in medical major to fulfil my dream. However
, it is not only because of my personal ambition, I have several reasons that make me want to work in public health.
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studying
medical
sector would give you knowledge about how our body works. It could really help us to maintain a healthy Correct article usage
the medical
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like smoking and eating Fix the agreement mistake
habits
fast-food
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fast food
,
since we know in detail what the risk of smoking Remove the comma
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such
as how the
nicotine affects our organs.
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Secondly
, when you graduate from medical school and become a doctor, you can help many people
. You can go to rural areas where the
medical resources are very needed. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, your contribution is not only about helping sick people
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giving
live
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in conducting research that have
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has
such
as improving the quality of medicine in some Correct your spelling
chronic
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disease. We already experienced the impact, when we face the Covid-19 pandemic in 2020Correct your spelling
chronic
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when Remove the comma
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the
medical research has a significant influence to handle the virus.
To sum up, I will choose to Correct article usage
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study
medical course, because it can help many people
. Actually, Every job role could help communities in different ways and have their
own contribution, but in my opinion, a doctor could be very helpful in the post-pandemic era, which we are facing recently.Correct pronoun usage
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