Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what coule be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

The

last

several decades have seen a surge in the violence rate.

This

is due to technological advancement and the leak of consumer

data

from online shopping

companies

. While these problems have made so many damaging effects on the customer, there are several measures that the states and a company can take to address these challenges. The main reason why the fraud rate increased in a couple of years is that many people share their personal

information

in online media due to the technological advances that have made online communication much simpler and easier.

Furthermore

, the leakage of customers' personal

information

from a bank or online commerce has made many hackers could access people's personal

information

more easily.

Thus

, fraudsters are able to access everyone's personal

information

that can be used for a crime,

such

as stealing money, etc.

For example

, my friend has experienced fraud because they upload their personal identity card photos on the internet and there is someone who used it to make a transaction without any consent from my friend.

Nevertheless

, there are two steps that the government and

companies

could do to tackle

this

obstacle.

First

, there should be a consumer

data

protection law published by the authority.

Second

, the company should enforce people to do a double sign-in method if they want to sign in to their bank or online shop accounts. As an illustration, in Indonesia, there

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customer

data

protection policies that enforces

companies

to encrypt any personal-related info.

This

way, it will prevent fraudsters to access our personal

data

that could be used for crimes, and eventually, the violence rate will be diminished. In conclusion, a rise in the crime level is caused by technological development and

data

leakage from a company. While these have affected

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on many, the government and commerce

companies

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solving these issues.