Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what coule be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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several decades have seen a surge in the violence rate.

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is due to technological advancement and the leak of consumer

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from online shopping

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. While these problems have made so many damaging effects on the customer, there are several measures that the states and a company can take to address these challenges. The main reason why the fraud rate increased in a couple of years is that many people share their personal

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in online media due to the technological advances that have made online communication much simpler and easier.

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, the leakage of customers' personal

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from a bank or online commerce has made many hackers could access people's personal

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more easily.

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, fraudsters are able to access everyone's personal

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that can be used for a crime,

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as stealing money, etc.

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, my friend has experienced fraud because they upload their personal identity card photos on the internet and there is someone who used it to make a transaction without any consent from my friend.

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, there are two steps that the government and

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could do to tackle

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obstacle.

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, there should be a consumer

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protection law published by the authority.

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, the company should enforce people to do a double sign-in method if they want to sign in to their bank or online shop accounts. As an illustration, in Indonesia, there

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customer

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protection policies that enforces

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to encrypt any personal-related info.

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way, it will prevent fraudsters to access our personal

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that could be used for crimes, and eventually, the violence rate will be diminished. In conclusion, a rise in the crime level is caused by technological development and

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leakage from a company. While these have affected

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on many, the government and commerce

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solving these issues.