If some people get a chance to choose between life without work in spending most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by many that if the masses are given a chance to select life without
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they tend not to show their interest in
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. I completely disagree with the statement stated above, and in
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essay, I will state the reasons from my view.
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with, the most compelling reason for holding my view is that by working people can earn their livelihood,
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it might not be possible. The reason for
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is that if multitudes intend to maintain their basic needs including
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of food, education fees, medical bills, and to purchase clothes,
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they require
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, and only through working they can achieve everything.
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, one of my elder brothers got a lottery and received 5 lakhs tk as an award,
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he decided to not
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and
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spent his all
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to do
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recreational activities.
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, having finished that
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, he had to suffer from
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life because of not going to
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regularly. Another valid reason for advocating
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view is that if individuals do not
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then
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their nation will not be able to develop their
economy
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since to boost the
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of any country, they have to have productive workers, without them it would be a nightmare to improve the GDP of any province. To illustrate,
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recent research conducted by Queen's University
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found that almost 55
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of people in Bangladesh are unemployed and they do not like to do jobs to make
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not only for their family members but
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for keeping contributing to enhancing their nation's
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even though they have the opportunities.
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, it has been 40 years since 1978 the government of Bangladesh
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not able to make any big advancements. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the notion because people may not earn their livelihood without working, and their nation will not be able to progress in their
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • constraints of employment
  • immerse
  • personal fulfillment
  • enhanced relationships
  • work-related stress
  • professional achievements
  • financial insecurity
  • societal backlash
  • cultural expectations
  • identity and worth
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