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you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Wesley, It has been just a few days since I left your place after spending my
vacations
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, I already miss it. My off-time couldn’t have gone any better! I particularly remember that Chinese food, what a delight it was! Thank you so much for letting me stay and for your amazing hospitality. I actually left my wallet while picking up my stuff, as you know I was in a rush, because of that taxi driver who came really early. I believe it must be on the shelf
next
 to the TV, where I usually keep it before I sit to watch Netflix. Since you told me that you are appearing for a test within a few days in my city, would you be able to bring it with you? Please do come to my place so we can catch up again,
also
 give me a chance to return some of the
favor
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 back. Hope to hear back from you soon! Best Regards, Govinda
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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