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Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is considered by some that violation prevention is responsible for politics,
also
 some others think that it is individual responsibility; I agree with the
first
 one I think if the authority set the right principles it affects the violation rate. On the one hand, self-protection is necessary for human lives, and it's an individual responsibility.
In other words
, If somebody doesn't have self-care and self-protection, they will face harm sooner than others. So
first
 of all it's the responsibility of humans that protect themselves from faces to dangers and evil.
On the other hand
, the law should protect
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people from danger and crimes. For ,example if the ministry
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 responsible for preventing corruption, it will monitor the felony rate and try to control it.
Finally
 ,in my opinion, it is necessary for people to protect themselves from being harmed and facing a
misdemeanor
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But depends on the regime's function. The union should set the right principles for wrongdoing and criminals to prevent crime and decrease its rate of it. In conclusion, preventing
misdeed
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 requires
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responsible power in the background and
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 it needs people with a self-protection culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • responsible for crime prevention
  • legislative power
  • trained personnel
  • public institutions
  • police force
  • judiciary
  • correctional facilities
  • maintain law and order
  • public good
  • personal accountability
  • self-defense measures
  • security systems
  • vigilant
  • community watch programs
  • education on personal security
  • empower individuals
  • reduce the risk of becoming victims of crime
  • synergistic approach
  • robust governmental measures
  • proactive steps
  • collaborative approach
  • foundation of security
  • aware and prepared citizenry
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