Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree?

We cannot imagine the world without wet soils, and grasses, after smelling
of
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rain
, the cloudy sky even some feelings we feel during
rain
, all things related to
rain
.
Rain
is one of the most important forecasts in
this
world we live in.
This
essay will discuss
rain
's positive side and impacts on the environment.
First
of all,
rain
is the main thing in agriculture, it helps vegetables and fruits grow. In the
last
few years, because of the lack of
rain
, there happened a few droughts, and drought affected people's health and consumption.
For example
, many years ago, back in my hometown, lots of vegetables and fruits did not grow as before, and many people suffered from hunger. Because that year it did not
rain
in 3 months and people were anxious about hunger will continue.
Moreover
, if the
rain
stopped, there would be many problems
such
as a lot of lakes and rivers drying up, and animals dying from the lack of water. Many countries gain more deserts, and the human population will be decreased in a few seconds. In conclusion,
rain
is truly our best friend.
Rain
gives us lots of wonderful things like food, beautiful nature and the environment. Sometimes it gives feelings of happiness, excitement, and even sadness.
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