Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

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Several towns prohibit special automobiles from inserting the
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and constrain
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to make use of cycles and autobuses.From my point of view,it has more pros
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cons but it
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has disadvantages.In
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examine
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examine
both advantages and disadvantages
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issue
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. There are a
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of significant benefits that
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accidents, according to statistics, most of the
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accidents in the world occur in countries with a high population density and
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for countries that have
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, Singapore, which has
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, the government for the
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introduced motor taxis in order to reduce the
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density and make
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's
transportation
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easier. The use of
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practical public
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vehicle was very cheap for the public. After doing
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, the
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was relieved and the time that
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lost in
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was shortened. The
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advantage of
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reduces the
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of
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and air it causes
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exhaust emissions,
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, if we assume that the average
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of
people
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a bus can take is 30, when
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use public
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of personal
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, the harmful gases emitted by
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are reduced by 30 times.
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makes the whole ecology harmful, primarily air pollution.  protects from the dangers of the few.Turning to the other side of the argument,
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increases the
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of
people
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who will be affected in a possible accident, so what does
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While the maximum
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of
people
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in two vehicles that can be affected in an accident is 8,
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increases to over 30 in public
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, and in
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accidents, public
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can cause mass murders.
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,
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are very practical and useful, they are very vulnerable to collisions with
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, which makes them dangerous. 
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, public transport is never as comfortable as private
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, which is the one with the loud conversations of the passengers and uncomfortable seats. Having weighed everything mentioned
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,I can come to
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conclusion that there are many advantages to the introduction of public
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instead
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of personal vehicles, but there are
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some disadvantages that are overlooked, so these risks should be taken into account when introducing new rules on
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;  It should be rehabilitated in a way that causes the least harm to the environment and
people
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.
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