Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

Several towns prohibit special automobiles from inserting the
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and constrain
people
to make use of cycles and autobuses.From my point of view,it has more pros
then
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cons but it
also
has disadvantages.In
this
essay,I will
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examine
axamine
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examine
both advantages and disadvantages
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issue
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. There are a
number
of significant benefits that
this
prevents
traffic
accidents, according to statistics, most of the
traffic
accidents in the world occur in countries with a high population density and
this
application is a very effective solution
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for countries that have
this
problem.
For
example
, Singapore, which has
this
problem, can be a very good
example
, the government for the
last
30 years
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introduced motor taxis in order to reduce the
traffic
density and make
people
's
transportation
easier. The use of
this
practical public
transportation
vehicle was very cheap for the public. After doing
this
, the
traffic
was relieved and the time that
people
lost in
traffic
was shortened. The
second
advantage of
this
application is that
such
public
transportation
reduces the
number
of
cars
and air it causes
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exhaust emissions,
for
example
, if we assume that the average
number
of
people
a bus can take is 30, when
people
use public
transportation
instead
of personal
cars
, the harmful gases emitted by
cars
are reduced by 30 times.
This
makes the whole ecology harmful, primarily air pollution.  protects from the dangers of the few.Turning to the other side of the argument,
this
increases the
number
of
people
who will be affected in a possible accident, so what does
this
mean
.
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While the maximum
number
of
people
in two vehicles that can be affected in an accident is 8,
this
increases to over 30 in public
transportation
, and in
such
accidents, public
transportation
can cause mass murders.
For
example
,
although
motortaxis
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motor taxis
are very practical and useful, they are very vulnerable to collisions with
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other cars
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, which makes them dangerous. 
In addition
, public transport is never as comfortable as private
cars
, which is the one with the loud conversations of the passengers and uncomfortable seats. Having weighed everything mentioned
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,I can come to
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conclusion that there are many advantages to the introduction of public
transportation
instead
of personal vehicles, but there are
also
some disadvantages that are overlooked, so these risks should be taken into account when introducing new rules on
transportation
;  It should be rehabilitated in a way that causes the least harm to the environment and
people
.
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