the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbition, and planned future development of the site
The maps
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
norbition
area in the present days, Correct your spelling
nutrition
as well as
,the planned development.
Overall
,the town
will become more residential in most areas. It is noticeable that numerous amenities will be built in the center
of Change the spelling
centre
town
.
It is clear that
the factories in the town
center
will be replaced by houses.A school will erectChange the spelling
centre
in
the east side of the village to make way for the factory at present. There will be a playground near the river in the east -tern which is around the houses. So A Change preposition
on
new
constructed vehicle track from the playground to the school. It Change the adjective
newly
also
will be extended across the river at the top of the map where a large house will be constructed and remain a part of farmland
.
Correct article usage
the farmland
In addition
, There
will be shops and a medical centre at the roundabout in the middle of Fix capitalization
there
town
. Moreover
, a small roundabout will be erected near the big one toward the bottom of the map.Submitted by josynguyen92 on
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