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people naturally resist making cahnges in their lives. what kind of problems can this cause ? what solutions can you suggest.

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People
 are always frightened to make a decision in their life if they have no experience with
this
 before.
Additionally
, as human nature, they don’t want to feel insecure and have no confidence to meet with new environments like new society, new jobs, etc. Undoubtedly they are still so stubborn to change and want to be stable in their lives without any ambitions.
Then
, all of
this
 could cause much trouble.
This
 essay will
first
 explore several problems of
this
 issue,
then
 examine possible,
solutions
 and
finally
, evaluate those
solutions
. Admittedly, when a person fears stepping out of
comfort
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their comfort
his comfort
her comfort
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 zone, the accustomed place for each person
:
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 might have a problem related to personal development. As for someone's habits when they decide to stay in a hometown or in a primitive society, their routines are always the same.
Thus
, their personalities are consists of identical resources which are from
people
 in the area where they live.
Moreover
, They may lack world knowledge due to their nature which
fears
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fear
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to change
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changing
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 new things in their lives,
therefore
 they have never spent a lifetime in other countries. It is mean they rarely gain knowledge of other cultures too. In
solutions
, the way to fix the problems is that
people
 should be open-minded in communication and should be flexible with every kind of situation.
Traveling
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 to other countries can lead to a better quality of life. And
then
, by living overseas, you can gain learning new language skills and
also
 different foods and general cultural differences. To conclude, there are two main problems with these issues which are personal development and lack of knowledge around the world. As for
solutions
, I believe that the practical ways to tackle them.
People
 should seek scholarships or move to a new country for jobs because there are cheaper than other
solutions
.
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