The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration depicts an industrial section in the town of Norbiton and how it is going to get developed in the future.

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, the area is planned to get more urbanised. The site is next to the farmland on the north and the river is running west to east. There is a square in the centre which is surrounded by eight factories, no housing area to be seen.

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, in the future plans, the river will be divided by a bridge in the north and it is getting connected to the large square in the centre. Several housing areas will be built around the square,

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a playground and a school on the east. Shops and medical centre is planned to get established in the west and all factories will get removed.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

134 words

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Alternative energy sources that use natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter •explain why you want to reduce your working hours •say which hours you would like to work •describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer

You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: •explain which course you are interested in •say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: • explain which course you are interested in • say what you know about the university • explain why you should receive the scholarship