The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration depicts an industrial section in the town of Norbiton and how it is going to get developed in the future.
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, the area is planned to get more urbanised.
The site is next to the farmland on the north and the river is running west to east.
There is a square in the centre which is surrounded by eight factories, no housing area to be seen.
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, in the future plans, the river will be divided by a bridge in the north and it is getting connected to the large square in the centre. Several housing areas will be built around the square, Linking Words
as well as
a playground and a school on the east. Shops and medical centre is planned to get established in the west and all factories will get removed.Linking Words
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