The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration depicts an industrial section in the town of Norbiton and how it is going to get developed in the future.

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, the area is planned to get more urbanised. The site is next to the farmland on the north and the river is running west to east. There is a square in the centre which is surrounded by eight factories, no housing area to be seen.

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, in the future plans, the river will be divided by a bridge in the north and it is getting connected to the large square in the centre. Several housing areas will be built around the square,

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a playground and a school on the east. Shops and medical centre is planned to get established in the west and all factories will get removed.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

134 words

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future developement of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people like to work in company which offer high salaries, other prefer working in a company which offer good working atmosphere. What do you think? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Many TV advertisements are aimed at children. What are the effects? Should TV advertisements be controlled?