Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era,

pollution

is

the

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top of the list

dilemma

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of the globe.

Therefore

, some representatives of

the

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society believe that

this

is due

the

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rise in personal vehicles while others think that factories are the main

source

of

pollution

.

This

essay will shed light on both statements and will give a valid opinion in the end. On the one hand, in

this

modern

period

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everyone wants to have

a

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personal transport for the sake of comfort which

results

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an increase in the number of cars.

For example

, in my town,

majority

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the majority

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of the residents have their own transport.

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have

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resulted in a hike in

air

pollution

in the town and nearby areas.

Moreover

, some of the countries do not have

a

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good public transport

systems

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which

compells

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compels

host people to arrange their personal cars leading to more smoke in the

air

.

For instance

, in

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pakistan

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there

is

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no standard commuting systems for the masses.

Therefore

, most

of

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the

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people prefer to buy their own vehicles and

as a

result

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adds to the

pollution

.

On the other hand

, nowadays

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industrialisation

industrialization

has evolved rapidly which is the most common

source

of

pollution

.

to begin

with, factories produce a huge amount

smoke

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of smoke

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which

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pollutes

pollute

polluts

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pollutes

the

air

we

breath

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in.

In other words

, cities which have

large

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a large

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number

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of industries bear a very high

air

quality index.

Furthermore

, companies producing chemicals drain their wastes both into the water and

air

thus

contaminating the whole environment. To give a clear example, These chemical wastes contain toxic constituents which negatively

affects

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marine life. To sum up,

although

, vehicles are

the

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source

of

pollution

.

Nevertheless

,

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industries

industories

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industries

are contaminating

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our

out

oue

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our

environment. In my opinion, factories

is

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the

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biggest

beggist

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biggest

source

of

pollution

as they produce impurities which affect both

air

and water.