Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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contemporary era,

pollution

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is

the

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top of the list

dilemma

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of the globe.

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, some representatives of

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society believe that

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is due

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rise in personal vehicles while others think that factories are the main

source

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of

pollution

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.

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essay will shed light on both statements and will give a valid opinion in the end. On the one hand, in

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modern

period

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everyone wants to have

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personal transport for the sake of comfort which

results

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an increase in the number of cars.

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, in my town,

majority

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the majority

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of the residents have their own transport.

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have

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resulted in a hike in

air

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pollution

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in the town and nearby areas.

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, some of the countries do not have

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good public transport

systems

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system

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which

compells

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compels

host people to arrange their personal cars leading to more smoke in the

air

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.

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, in

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pakistan

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there

is

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no standard commuting systems for the masses.

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, most

of

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the

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people prefer to buy their own vehicles and

as a

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result

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adds to the

pollution

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.

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, nowadays

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industrialisation

industrialization

has evolved rapidly which is the most common

source

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of

pollution

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.

to begin

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with, factories produce a huge amount

smoke

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of smoke

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which

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pollutes

pollute

polluts

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pollutes

the

air

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we

breath

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in.

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, cities which have

large

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number

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of industries bear a very high

air

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quality index.

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, companies producing chemicals drain their wastes both into the water and

air

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thus

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contaminating the whole environment. To give a clear example, These chemical wastes contain toxic constituents which negatively

affects

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marine life. To sum up,

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, vehicles are

the

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source

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of

pollution

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.

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,

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industries

industories

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industries

are contaminating

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our

out

oue

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our

environment. In my opinion, factories

is

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are

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the

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biggest

beggist

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biggest

source

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of

pollution

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as they produce impurities which affect both

air

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and water.