Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
contemporary era, Linking Words
pollution
is at the top of the list of dilemmas of the globe. Some representatives of society believe that Use synonyms
this
is Linking Words
due to
the rise in personal vehicles Linking Words
while
others think that factories are the main cause of Linking Words
pollution
. Use synonyms
This
essay will shed light on both statements and in the end, will give a valid opinion.
On the one hand, in Linking Words
this
modern period, everyone wants to have personal transport. Linking Words
This
results in an increase in the number of cars. Linking Words
For example
, in my town, the majority of the residents have their own transport. Linking Words
This
has resulted in a hike in Linking Words
air
Use synonyms
pollution
in the town and nearby areas. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some countries do not have a good public transport system which compels host people to arrange their personal cars leading to more smoke in the atmosphere. Linking Words
For instance
, in Pakistan, there is no standard commuting system for the masses. Linking Words
Therefore
, most people prefer to buy their own vehicles and Linking Words
as a result
, add to the Linking Words
pollution
.
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On the other hand
, nowadays industrialization has evolved rapidly. Linking Words
This
is the most common origin of Linking Words
pollution
. Use synonyms
To begin
with, factories produce a huge amount of smoke which pollutes the Linking Words
air
we breathe in and causes a number of respiratory diseases Use synonyms
such
as chronic cough, lung cancer and asthma. Linking Words
In other words
, cities which have a large number of industries bear a very high atmosphere quality index. Linking Words
Furthermore
, companies producing chemicals drain their wastes both into the water and Linking Words
air
. Use synonyms
thus
contaminating the whole environment. To give a clear example, These chemical wastes contain toxic constituents which negatively affect marine life.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
although
, vehicles are a source of deterioration. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, industries are contaminating our environment. In my opinion, factories are the biggest source of Linking Words
pollution
because they produce impurities affecting both Use synonyms
air
and water.Use synonyms
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